I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tafola Selena I love that pretty flower you used it has lots of colour. I'm 10 as well. Your favourite colour is blue my favourite colour is blue too. I love it so much Maybe more colour next time though. How many are in your family ? From Naomi
Kia ora I like the color of your all about me. I like monkeys to there really funny , I think you might need some more colour What's your whats your favourite city by Regan
Kia ora Selena I love all the pretty colours you’ve used.My favourite colour is blue too and I love netball also.Maybe you could use more colour in the background of the boxes. From Naomi
Kia ora Selena,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the world of blogging! I can't wait to see the great learning you share on your blog. Well done completing your first blog post.
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Tafola Selena I love that pretty flower you used it has lots of colour. I'm 10 as well. Your favourite colour is blue my favourite colour is blue too. I love it so much Maybe more colour next time though. How many are in your family ? From Naomi
ReplyDeleteKia ora
ReplyDeleteI like the color of your all about me. I like monkeys to there really funny ,
I think you might need some more colour What's your whats your favourite city by Regan
Kia ora Selena I love all the pretty colours you’ve used.My favourite colour is blue too and I love netball also.Maybe you could use more colour in the background of the boxes. From Naomi
ReplyDeleteKia ora selena I really like all the pretty colours you have put! and I really like netball to!
ReplyDeleteyour all about me is really good because it doesn't have to much colour and monkeys are so cute.
ReplyDeleteKind regards Dayna