I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Selena This poem is tino pai! I love how you have added photos of the bulls to give the reader some idea. My tip is maybe next time make the finishing a bit longer. I enjoyed reading this poem. By Lily
kia ora Selena
ReplyDeleteyou have the same bull as me
I like the background you have put
maybe you could change the font of your writing
by Ethan
Kia Ora Selena
ReplyDeleteThis poem is tino pai! I love how you have added photos of the bulls to give the reader some idea. My tip is maybe next time make the finishing a bit longer. I enjoyed reading this poem.
By Lily
thank you
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